Hey Jack - take a look at your embed code (widths etc) as your Art Of document is 'too wide' - get it in proportion and centralise your documentation and video - ensure your blog submission looks purposeful and tidy!
also ... just looking at your Art Of.... you have no story synopsis or premise or introduction to what your story 'is'... students often forget to do this because they know their projects too well (and so do we) but you need to think about these documents being for a stranger. You've got some time, so can I suggest you look at what might be missing from your Art Of?
Hey Jack - take a look at your embed code (widths etc) as your Art Of document is 'too wide' - get it in proportion and centralise your documentation and video - ensure your blog submission looks purposeful and tidy!
ReplyDeletealso ... just looking at your Art Of.... you have no story synopsis or premise or introduction to what your story 'is'... students often forget to do this because they know their projects too well (and so do we) but you need to think about these documents being for a stranger. You've got some time, so can I suggest you look at what might be missing from your Art Of?
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