Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Octavia - Finished Establishing shot

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1 comment:

  1. Okay - so while this is nicely dynamic composition, I think you need to look at the city itself, just in terms of having a go at creating more of an impression of density in terms of the buildings - yes, we'd get a sense of it being made up of bits, with light showing through here and there, but would we really be able to see all the way to the other side like that? Can you also give a greater sense of the inevitably gravity of the mass - it doesn't seem to be effecting the horizontal cables at all - can you create a more convincing sense of weight and mass?